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The conversation between Karkov and Alana turned into a longer slog than I had expected! We'll be getting back on track in short order. Thanks to everyone for enduring this prolonged lull in the action. When I print the novel, I’ll have to see if I can rearrange things to punctuate the conversation a bit and improve the pacing.

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